by Avrii Monrielle Jun 3, 2007
category :
Dark, fantasy /
fantasy, mystical
A blanket of black and blue, |
Wow, another amazing poem by you. You have a talent, I sure hope you are able to realize this. This poem was very well written, once again. Great job. |
by *Charisma*
It's full of descriptive writing, but i feel it's hard to understand. Sometimes less wordiness can really help a reader to feel the poem and understand it. But it was good, so 5/5. |