Crash of the Moor

by Avrii Monrielle   Jun 3, 2007


A blanket of black and blue,
Spread out through moor, and
Pillagery among the depths,
Of western fleet and shore.

Entumbling lots cast forth,
Deep among grey ashes,
Swallowed within sultry pits,
Of distasteful despair.

A subtle swoon and lick of lips,
As death returns its toll,
Sultry taste buds mutter words,
Floor bequeathed in bitterness.

Walls crash as a river flows,
Pounding to a luminescent rhythm,
Time stopping with a hand at twelve,
The other just a memory.

Blankets constrict, a rhythm beating,
As hears of the hallowed swoon in distaste,
Pounding at the sultry words,
Bequeathed under luminescent depths.

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  • 17 years ago

    by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG

    Wow, another amazing poem by you. You have a talent, I sure hope you are able to realize this. This poem was very well written, once again. Great job.

    5.5
    :]

  • 17 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    It's full of descriptive writing, but i feel it's hard to understand. Sometimes less wordiness can really help a reader to feel the poem and understand it. But it was good, so 5/5.
    Charisma*