I loved this poem a lot, it is so true. Great job, Isabelle. 5+/5

~Lizzie~

I can kindof see what your saying with this peice of writing. It was intresting ill give ypou that. It also made me think - love poems dont usually do that. But you made me ask myself what is love? What is true true love? Does it even exist in this society? Is it a thing of the past, unknown to man at present? You kinda take the reader into the past and just make them wonder.. I mean love are bound to have problmes, every single couple does. Yet hear your giving this image that there is no problems. Nothing. I guess its a bit like this thing that we all want. So yeah i loved the messgae of this poem and i lvoed the fact it made me think. I dont read love poems that often and this one was quite suprising. That said the flow was sketchy. And try using a more varied punctuation. Keep writing though! xx

Aww this made me sad.
innocent and precious.
i loved it.
i gave it 5 =]
Geo