April

It was like a fairytale love and I liked how you expressed the age difference as fall and spring
It was so sweet and cute

Beatifully penned,
Laura

Ps:What do you think of a collab with me?I think it would be gorgeus
Let me know michael

Aweuhh this is a great poem. i really liked it! great job! 5/5!

Thank-you very much for the comment on my poem "dreams and reality". I am so sorry to be returning the favor so late. I'm sorry but your poem is no interest of mine. You have a good description sure, but for a poem to be truly good it needs to properly rhyme. It's very good that you had even stanzas and, a rhyme scheme for the last stanza, but it felt like each stanza was a seperate poem all together. And it didn't end right either. It was one of those that are too short and leave you hanging. I do like meaning behind it though. I can tell you that much. I'm so sorry if this is offending but my whole thing is honesty. I wouldn't be the poet I am now if it wasn't for the harsh critisism I recieved myself. I am sure this is not your best piece.

God bless

~skittles

A very beautiful piece, My friend.
A very touching poem, with good imagery, the wording was flawless.
Keep up your brilliant work
love Tara-Kay
x

I love this...great imagery.felt it
The bit about spring and fall was my favourite bit
beautiful
xxxx