This is so sad. i feel this way about my grans death and how the family just changed and shut everyone out. this is really well written well donexxxxxxxxx

Great poem of your love one ,well written and I could feel your heartache ,very sad poem, great job, keep it up. your friend Tracy, 5/5

This was a sad heartfelt write. Loosing aloved one is always tough but when that person is the stitching that held all together it can be especially tough.

Just one suggestion on this line
Her father pasted away
It may read easier if you used passed instead of pasted...but its jus a thought.

Beautifully penned!

Sad poem it held a lot of emotion.

This is a good piece. You wrote it from your heart. To lose someone you love and the only to make you strong, really hurts and when that person leaves, the world seem to shatter to pieces.