Thw wording in this is awesome. well done. i like it

I like the structure and the meaning runs deep! :[

i know what its like to be tortured but i wont say that i understand for i get tortured for all the opposite reasons...

keep up the writing :]

and maybe some brigher poems?

haha :P

This is a sad poem?
but yet it made me feel happi!
i liked it!
it was really good well done :)
peace! xXx