A very intresting read. Never read something like it. You start the poem with a question whcih really made the reader think what you meant and what you could mean. It made us wonder who the question was aimed at. Then you go on to make the reader ownder what this facade is. What made then lie? Then at the blttum you atlast mention a name, "Dollface". Intresting name. You repete soeme words when you say things in aid of dollface it shows how you feel towards dollface. Like "Never, dollfce, never". I liked some of the rhymes youve used in this poem. Quite enjoyable. Keep writing! xx