Right section to me yes and i like your language through out its good poem well done xxxxxxxx

I liked this one, but i think it should be in the dark poems contest, because although its kinda sad, its a little freaky, if you get what i'm saying.
back to the content of the poem, i can see the emotion and the pain, i think it flowed very well, and again, another awesome poems
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I meant dark poems section, you knew that.