*hugs you tight* I'm sorry that you ever had to go through this but it's clear by talking to you that it's only made you stronger and wiser and able to help others thats pasts haunt them ^_^ Your really a wonderful person and even if I didn't know you I'd be able to tell that just by reading your poems =) |
by unknown
Wonderful piece.. I love reading this poem... |
Wow.....that was sad. |
by Goran Rahim
Wow, tis was amazing poem, very well written with alot of deep emotions in it. you have done a great job..... beside the great word choice and style, i really love the rhyming, it gave a great read into the poem, keep it up dear. |
Dang!! i dont have words to explain how i feel about this... but i do rate this a 5 also.. are a wonderful writer |
by Becca
You are a powerful writer with words that speak to your soul with great emotions behind it. You can really put your feelings in wonderful word choice. |
by xxSuicidalxx
Very powerful piece! I really hope that didn't happen to you...thats so sad! Beautifully written peom with deep emotions...really like it! 5/5 |
by Jenni
Very sad poem. I think the reference to the teddy bear really made me realize that the character is still like a child on the inside, wanting to hold on to the past and change it, kind of way. Great job. 5/5 |