by skynerraw Jun 3, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
It was an emotional day |
by CHOKE
This was a great poem really. |
Great poem.. good emotion and nice flow.. keep it up :D |
Great poem.. good emotion and nice flow.. keep it up :D |
I know exactly how you feel about wanting the last day of school to last.. Pretty good poem dear : ) In some parts, it sounds like the rhyme might've been forced, but still -- nice poem. |
by Marc Ortiz
Goodbyes are never forever unless you want them to be =) Well I remember my last day in school.. Its really sad :( anyway to improve this you should use more powerful words :) flow was okay for me. thanks for sharing :) tc |