Hey,
i think i already commented on one of your other poems, but i realy loved it, and its the same with this.
the words you used are so strong, they ryme, and they fit so well.
i dont think i could use any other words better.
i love it!
you should realy think of entering some copm's, you can earn heaps of money from this stuff.
i love your work, id so vote for u
you have my vote!