Wow, the ending was touching. It actually made me feel. Love does have its own fortune unless you chose the right love. 5/5

Written beautifully, a very good piece, the love was portrayed well, the emotion stood out and i loved the beauty and peacefulness of this write.
best wishes,
Tara-Kay
x

You spelled "exstatic" wrong. I felt that the third stanza could use a bit of work, the first 2 lines are a bit shaky for me. The last stanza was great though, I felt, especially the "love behind her grin" part. Great job, just try to fix up those lines a little.

This poem was very sweet. it reminds me of my one lost love that i would do anything for to have him back.. awesome. 5/5

Nicely writte. You could expand on the idea a little more, making it more captivating and a better read. You had a few spelling mistakes, but thats easily corrected.
My favourite line would have to be...
'He was the love behind her grin'
I thought it was just beautiful and Heart touching.
Keep writting.
Elaine.

Aww this poem is so cute and it reminds me of me and my boyfriend i really like this poem i just cant stop thinkin about my man now! lol but you are a very talented writter! keep it up!

Aww sweet poem. i only found one thing to fix.

They were both extathic, together

i think you meant estatic. like super happy?

=]

Awww. Such a nice poem.
I like it.

xxx.