My bad day

by Tracy D Rollings   Jun 3, 2007


Went up the mountains
to clear my mind
got lost in the beauty
lost track of time.

Every store I came too
drove right on pass
didn't notice the fuel hand
soon ran out of gas.

Phone didn't have signal
so I couldn't talk
left my truck parked
and started to walk.

About two miles ahead
things start getting bad
car came up behind
three dudes were mad.©2007 Tracydr42

Said they want money
don't cause a big scene
didn't have any on me
then they got mean.

Ended up in a ditch
was just about dead
my ribs are cracked
blood from my head.

A old couple came by
gave me a ride
I'm thankful to them
to still be alive.

So when you think
things are really bad
they could get worse
makes you real mad.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Lu

    Tracy you have penned this painful event through verse.

    For every atrocious thing that happens in this world thank God there is an act of kindness on the other end ....
    Thank God for that sweet elderly couple.
    Hope you are feeling better now, my friend.

    Take care Tracy ....

  • 17 years ago

    by dawn green

    Another great one by tracy! good write!
    god bless

  • 17 years ago

    by Fsams

    I like the story and the flow in this piece. Its beautiful and you have really described your bad day. Great 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Tracy
    Very intense poem. Well done putting this story to verse.

    A old couple came by
    gave me a ride
    I'm thankful to them
    to still be alive.

    Thank God for people who still have compassion.
    Take Care Cindy

  • 17 years ago

    by Rach

    Aww so sad, i hope this didnt really happen to you, cos its horrible! great poem, was a good read :) keep it up 5/5

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