Aww so sad, i hope this didnt really happen to you, cos its horrible! great poem, was a good read :) keep it up 5/5

Tracy
Very intense poem. Well done putting this story to verse.

A old couple came by
gave me a ride
I'm thankful to them
to still be alive.

Thank God for people who still have compassion.
Take Care Cindy

I like the story and the flow in this piece. Its beautiful and you have really described your bad day. Great 5/5

Another great one by tracy! good write!
god bless

Tracy you have penned this painful event through verse.

For every atrocious thing that happens in this world thank God there is an act of kindness on the other end ....
Thank God for that sweet elderly couple.
Hope you are feeling better now, my friend.

Take care Tracy ....