I really liked this poem, most people have a hard time writing about weather and nature but you did a great job. I too love the rain and any chance I get to just go out and enjoy the feeling of the rain hit my body, I do. Excellent imagery great job 5/5

Alot of repetition, and it was good
nice work

I really loved this one...it was very well written and the imgery was vivid and beautiful...the describimg words you chose were superb..and i love rain..you've painted it's beauty well
Great job!
5/5
xxPoojaxx

I liked this alot I found it to be quite interesting. The repetition was good I found you pulled this off quite well. Your word choice amazing making this poem flow so beautifully. For a nature poem you done this amazingly. Truely well written. Well done~mel

Hmm. this poem isnt the best ive read of yours. idk how much the repetition really fits in this poem. however, the imagery was awesome. check your flow again. the words didnt blend as it couldve.

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I love this poem.
Although, it would seem better with
Punctuation.
Other than that...
I think your rhyming was smooth.
Your flow was great.

PS: Love your format :P
Your spelling was, too.
Wonderful right, dear.

I read your poem and found it quite an easy read and a pleasant piece. Keep up the good words. May the ebb and flow of your thoughts and emotions find a good spot to call home.

Hmm, different! but i liked it a lot =] especially this part

Dancing in the rain
Singing in the rain
Eating in the rain
Sleeping in the rain
Bathing in the rain
Living in the rain

it was really refreshing, i felt like i was actually doing those things
and it made me thirsty!! hehe

i gave it a 5

geo

I really liked the way this was written. And the concept was unique... it had my interest through the whole read! 5/5