by Monica AKA Mika Jun 4, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
I come to say Good-Bye and you stopped me before, but you cant stop me today, |
by bellATragedy
The poem is really deep. I can only imagine what happened. Your an incredbile writer. He was stupid who ever he was |
by Javier
Usually i dont like dark poems but this poem was soo good and i felt every emotion in every word this was amazing i just hope that you still dont feel this way |
by Melpomene
Original I liked it. The structure though hun was blinding I struggled so much reading this which disappointed me as I was enjoyed reading this. The ending was great definitly capturing just fix the structure try putting stanzas in. Alot easier to read and I'm sure many more would enjoy reading it that way. Good effort. ~mel |
I really, really like this. I'm not even going to mention the mistakes, because the wording, IMO, was just wonderful. I would have preferred the style if it was put into stanzas, but seriously, this was well written. |
by JaMeS
Not bad at all i really like the end part and especially |