You Made Me This Way

by Monica AKA Mika   Jun 4, 2007


I come to say Good-Bye and you stopped me before, but you cant stop me today,
Suicide call me crazy, but you made me this way.

Love me and leave me, that's the name of the game,
except i loved you, and you loved what's her name.

She hurt you so much how could you go back after all the things she did,
i could never hurt you like that, even if i wanted to, not even a little bit.

She stomped on your heart and now you stomped on mine,
I'm not going to lie to you and tell you I'll be fine.

All that negative stuff you used to say about her, do you now say it about me,
NO, because i treated you great i would even rub lotion on your feet.

I catered to you, like i would an old man,
Cook, clean whatever...i was your number one fan.

So when you go back to her think of all the arguments you had,
just think of how we never even argued once and how i NEVER got mad!

And when she rips your heart out AGAIN I'll be saying i told you so,
You shouldn't listened the first time, but you let the good one go...

So now my days are lonely and my smile hasn't been seen in days,
And although you don't know it, my heart has been broken in so many ways.

I just want to look down on you from the clouds in the sky,
and when i see you with her, I'll still be asking myself why.

You were my first and last love, what more can i say,
I always dreamed of love, but i never thought i would end this way.

She could never be like me, and thats something i know you know,
but whats done is done because you just let me go...

Now its my time, i hear him calling my name,
No more dreams for me, of fortune and fame.

But don't blame yourself even though there are no other reasons i can find,
But just remember what you always said, " love is blind."

Always remember she can't even kiss you like i do,
And as much as i am disappointed I will always miss and love you.

Because i remember someone told me when i was a little kid,
There's no past tense with love, you either do or you never did.

You've stopped me before, but you can't stop me today,
Suicide call me crazy, but you made me this way.

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  • 17 years ago

    by bellATragedy

    The poem is really deep. I can only imagine what happened. Your an incredbile writer. He was stupid who ever he was

  • 17 years ago

    by Javier

    Usually i dont like dark poems but this poem was soo good and i felt every emotion in every word this was amazing i just hope that you still dont feel this way

  • 17 years ago

    by Melpomene

    Original I liked it. The structure though hun was blinding I struggled so much reading this which disappointed me as I was enjoyed reading this. The ending was great definitly capturing just fix the structure try putting stanzas in. Alot easier to read and I'm sure many more would enjoy reading it that way. Good effort. ~mel

  • 17 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    I really, really like this. I'm not even going to mention the mistakes, because the wording, IMO, was just wonderful. I would have preferred the style if it was put into stanzas, but seriously, this was well written.

    Good job.

  • 17 years ago

    by JaMeS

    Not bad at all i really like the end part and especially

    Because i remember someone told me when i was a little kid,
    There's no past tense with love, you either do or you never did.

    mind if i put it as a quote of course ill say it came form you :)

    anyway really good stuff there