Its just a phase, dont you think of giving up like this and you very well know who all misses you each and every day.

Beautiful poem though and i could feel the pain as i do after reading each and every poem of yours.

Still looking for a happy poem, its been long...right? :o)

all the best and take care

Cindy, this poem gave me moist eyes.So much pain reflects in it.Its overhwelming with emotions of lost love. No words can comfort this pain but as friend i wish you peace and love from my heart .Bless ya.

Take care
love
chavii.

This is another very good piece cindy, been wondering when the next one was coming, as always its a perfect 5/5!!!

That was so beatiful. I can totally relate to it.

Sadness looms heavy
upon a broken heart
Rips a empty soul
Fate tore them apart

Love these lines...

Another wonderfully-written, heartrending piece, Ms. Cindy. This work endears me for having tugged my heart completely. I actually have been waiting for a new piece from you, and it is indeed a worthwhile wait. =]

Beautiful piece, nonetheless. You never seem to cease from touching my heart with your delicate words. Take care now.

Love,
Debbie

Cindy....How sad....I know how you miss him....and long for him......these lines are so heartbreaking:

Finding him in dreams
His love she devours

I know what a beautiful love the two of you shared and how painful the separation is....I hope someday you are reunited with your love.....I love you Cindy....Debbie

Cindy this brought tears to my eyes, to see you in so much pain.
I know your heart aches for John hun and I wish there was something I could do to help ease the pain. You have so many friends here that love you and care so much about you.

This poem was penned through tears, I feel.
Heart touching dear friend

(((( Big hugs))))
Luv ya, my friend

"Sadness looms heavy
upon a broken heart
Rips a empty soul
Fate tore them apart"

fate can be a miracle, or the worst thing to happen to someone, but everything can be justified, its just the justification thats going to drive us insane, we'll never have the answer that we're looking for.

this poem really captured the pain that you've gone through, and the hope for what you're longing for, i wish you the best, and keep up the great work..10/5!

This was amazing 5/5 and inspiring

Well this poem say the truth at the same time
u are the only one who can make that change, u put your faith in god that good now u have to try to do not be sad anymore!! life is hard life rough! if there is something tha all the human being in this earth have in common! is that none of them is satisfied by is condition, you just have to bless god for the little we have it could be worst than that!!
take care

Cindy,

"Awaking to darkness
Sun long ago set
Killing lonely hours
Trying hard to forget"

Very heartfelt and sad. Can certainly feel your pain in these words.

Always,
Jeannie

Wow. amazing. it flowed well. i love the word choice and the line "sun long ago set"... great job.

--thanks for the comment!

A very sad and heartfelt poem. Your vocab was very descriptive and created great imagery. The flow was good as well as the rhyming. Well done. 5/5

Tammie

Damn!! that poem kicks ass!! my poems suck... compared to a lot of people's on here...!! good job !!

Beautiful poem dear cindy, the deparation of seeing your love once more shines through strongly and brings tears to my eyes, stay strong cindy. xox sam

Awsum poem, i know just how that feels...
laters

Beacutiful Cindy, I love your wordings. You are always great and my favourite.
Tc

Thats good. keep up the great work.

The sense of loneliness and sadness is felt in this write. May your one day find peace and joy deep within your heart. Nicley done.

sadaddy

Its sad. but i liked it. you done great job in this writing style. i am happy. you have alot of talent. may God bless you. 5/5