To someone i loved
by shawn hoskins Jun 4, 2007
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I want you to know how much pain i've felt because of you, I know we had problems but there's nothing we couldn't have worked through, you left me lonely like we never loved at all, I couldn't tell you how many times i just waited by the phone hoping you'd call, it broke my heart to watch you slip through my hands, and how you could love me so much but move on so quickly i guess I'll never understand, but soon you'll see that you made a mistake, and everything quite didn't turn out like it was supposed to be, and one day you'll be missing something deep in your heart, something that truly loved you, that something is me. |
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16 years ago
Nicely written.. very expressive. 5/5
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16 years agoby HvN
I can definitley relate man, great job here, keep up the good work! 5/5
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16 years ago
by Hollymariee
Awe , thats really cute . I think that if you cut it up it would be easier to get into the flow of it , but otherwise it was really awesome .
I know we had problems but theirs nothing we couldn't have worked through,
"thiers" should be there's , just a little thing I've noticed -
16 years ago
by Nicole
I like this one as well.
Itz great.
good job! =] -
16 years ago
by noha
Waw, its so great poem
you got great talent to write like this,so simple and full of feeling,that deep feeling of love and pain.
i got your point and its right how to love someone and left him ,thats not right but it happend ,well done 5/5
