Wow!....beautiful very dark and powerful.. well written poem..You've penned a very clear picture for this one...Excellent description and the poem flowed smoothly too..
Great job!
Kp it up!
xxPoojaxx

This poem I quite enjoyed. Very powerful and dark holding strong emotions with a nicely portrayed story and meaning. The title was capturing enough but after i read the first line i was hooked. Vivid description used here definitly worth a 5/5 in my eye. Keep writing Karl. Definitly worth the read.~mel

This was quite a pleasure to read. Although I admit that I'd like to read more about the subject's morbid experiences, I was rather intrigued by this poem's 'The Angel Of Darkness' concept. The fact that something uncanny which is yet to be unearthed in between its lines thrills me exceedingly.

Nicely done, nonetheless.

-Marian

Hey,
a beautiful dark poem, with powerful words, I like your title its very eye catching although when i read your title i had a whole other idea in my head so its kind of inspiring. I like that, I also like the flow of the poem and the descriptions you used,, good work! 5/5 from me
kisses stephanie

Days resting are doing u good, this poem is something different to ur other stuff, but i like it, but i like all dark things, lol, yeat more praise and a job well done by u Mr Wild

GREAT JOB !!5/5 !!

This is an amazinng poem so powerful and the descriptions you have used flow so well keep up the good work.. 5/5
Dainee

The violent images replay in his mind,
Over and over as he watches them die,
Beaming truck lights, turn his eyes blind,
Screaming with hatred, please God why?

These lines are so beautiful. The whole poem rhymes well with a great flow. Great 5/5 worth.

A bit confusing, but interesting and a little different than your usual poetry. I enjoyed. Hi 5! NO seriously, 5/5

A bit confusing, but interesting and a little different than your usual poetry. I enjoyed. Hi 5! NO seriously, 5/5

A bit confusing, but interesting and a little different than your usual poetry. I enjoyed. Hi 5! NO seriously, 5/5

OOPS.

I LOVE this...the emotion and depth in this piece are clear for the reader to see, the first stanza really pulled me in and by the end of the first few lines I was completely hooked.
I loved the ending of this, I found it to be very intense and hardhitting.

Trying to find answers [[in]] a bottle of wine.
I think that should be "from"
When I saw that line.
I thought he was picking at a bottle, looking for answers.

Second stanza?
Perfect.

The violent images replay in his mind,
Over and over as he watches them die,
Beaming truck lights, turn his eyes blind,
Screaming with hatred, please God why?

I don't like that stanza.
Probably because I don't like death.
Sorry.

In his eyes, the enemy stands by the door,
See's a dark shadow, the angel of death,
The bottle slips, crashing to the wooden floor,
Frantic gasps, try to provide a critical breath.

Very discriptive dear.
I saw reaper with his sythe in the front door.
Just staring at the guy in shock.

Memories so fond, grow dark and bleak,
The melody of the music begins to fade,
Opening his mouth, but unable to speak,
knows this time, death he cannot evade.

Hmm... this kind of reminded me of
Final Destiny or something?
About how they escape death but in the end, they die.
I might have gotten the title wrong.

Wow.. yet another amazing poem..

Clock stands still, minutes don't pass,
Coping, to aid a less painful tomorrow.

i love those 2 lines.. and you can relate just those lines to almost anything.. very nice job as always =]

I must admit that you're better than me... lol love it.

Beautiful work! You send a touching flow in this poem! 5/5

Wow, omg, i absolutely loved it. it was so touching, you can certainly tell you write straight from your heart with every single word. great work.

Memories so fond, grow dark and bleak,
The melody of the music begins to fade,
Opening his mouth, but unable to speak,
knows this time, death he cannot evade.

my fave lines ^^ 5/5

I like a lot this poem.Congratulations,you have done a great work.Take good care of you.Best regards,Michelle.XxX

OMG I loved it especially this stanza:
In his eyes, the enemy stands by the door,
See's a dark shadow, the angel of death,
The bottle slips, crashing to the wooden floor,
Frantic gasps, try to provide a critical breath.

That is very deep to me. And very nice flow. I voted 5/5. Nicley penned love!