Comments : Wishing upon the star tonight

  • 17 years ago

    by Victoria

    Lovely sweetie, great job!

  • 17 years ago

    by Mary Rose

    Thx :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Sarah Mirabile

    Hey thanks for your comment. =)
    I love your poem. Keep up the good work. =)
    ~Sarah

  • 17 years ago

    by Reminders Torture

    Wow!!!a beautifully written poem.

    I hate this feeling deep inside
    The reason for my endless tears
    Alone and no one to confide
    I wish upon the star tonight
    To make me feel at ease

    I wish that soon I would be free
    From this woes that fraught my heart
    Emotions building up within
    Is just too much to bear.

    these are the best stanza's ever.keep up the good work.
    bye
    tc
    best wishes