It's beautiful..Great poem..it had a stroy-line behind it and was expressed well..
The was a tad off and other than a few grammar errors i found this write excellent!

Well penned..and the repetition of the title through out the poem added intensity to the emotions

Kp it up!
5/5
xxPoojaxx

WOW, this poem was really good. i love the way you use your words...i can really feel your emotion thru each word i read! I can relate to this i mean not completly because my ex wasnt 19 w/ a daughter but everything else i can relate to! I really like the flow to this poem and my favorite part has got to be :"I would do anything to wake up next to you
and to hold you while you sleep
i miss all those nights,
i wounder why i ever left" i dont know why but i felt like you were in my head because that is exactly what i want right now from my ex...but i know it will never happen so anyways...5/5 Keep writting

It's so true that we sometimes leave a relationship because the pain is so overwhelming, not knowing that the pain only gets worse and the love never fades. Excellent poem 5/5

"wounder" just that little typo, other than that its amazing writing, you're very talented, the raw emotion thats there is incredible, keep it up! 6/5!

That would have been a complicated relationship. I liked this poem. It had a very nice flow all through out it and the word choice was ok. I gave it a 5/5. One more thing this poem had was emotion with out it I'm afraid this poem would have been a little boring. It was a great poem:)

I agree with the eomotion part. But over all this is a great poem. 5/5 keep righting!!

That was a great tragic love poem. I could really feel the story and what the girl was going through, I could feel her confusion and pain. Again, it didn't really flow very well, but your rhyming was great and the emotions you put into it where touching. Well done! 5/5

The relationships that hurt the most and the ones where the love and pain you feel are equal. Theres no escape from hurt because you leave to be happier and you end up heartbroken or you stay and things stay equal. And i love how you wrote this poem. The rhythm wasnt always create but it still had a strong story line

This was an interesting read, I enjoyed reading this because im sure people can relate to this in so many ways. Truely a complicated relationship. The topic was great. I like reading tragic love poems but not too many can pull it off and you did just that. Well done on this an awsome write even better read. 5/5~mel

This was a beautifully written poem and it was interesting to read... You got talent and I hope to read more of your work... I like the emotion that you put into it and how I know that some people can relate to this... Keep up the good work... :)

Your first stanza?
Very raw emotions.

i left because [[you're]] complicated
[[your're]] 19[[,]] have a kid[[,]] and her mum
but you still made time for me
i miss you so much

You should collaborate more on the whole
Complicated one.
It's not very discriptive.

I would do anything to wake up next to you
That's a really strong sentence.
It kind of contradicts with your other sentences, though.
If you say "I'd do anything"
It usually means.. well you'd do anything.

i [[wounder]] why i ever left
It's wonder, dear.

Hmm..
Your ending was pretty great.
But I didn't really like your poem that much.
It was confusing.
Not the good confusing that makes you wonder.
The confusing that makes you befuddled.
4/5, dear.

To me there are two ways to write one to the general public and the other to a privite party. I feel with out knowing the history of the person you are writing this poem too the general reader gets lost. Not saying this is bad it just different in the type of audience your writing for. Just a thought Plot121

I like this because its made me realise and think a lot about someone in my life, i like how you have expressed about not stopped loving him even though he has hurt you. again, i think your talent is very good xxxxxxxxx

This is what i mean i love it, over all perfect even the flow were so smooth and the mixture of different emotions were great!! Keep it up