Pain

by Emo   Jun 4, 2007


He presses
She falls
Hiding the bruises
Running down the halls
Bleeding...hurt real bad
No one cares
She cries just a tad
This with nobody she shares
He presses harder
She blacks out
She wakes
From a friends shout
The bruises and scars
Are more visible than stars
She hides and cries
She smiles and lies
But inside...
While she'll hide
She dies.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Shadows Reign

    Very powerfully done. Some very beautiful and powerful words used, such as:
    T"he bruises and scars
    Are more visible than stars"
    But more inportantly, you've placed into words what pretty much everyone does every day through words such as these:
    "She hides and cries
    She smiles and lies
    But inside...
    While she'll hide
    She dies."
    So much emotion is placed within this poem and I love it!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by K3LSI3

    This poem is so full of emotion.I liked it alot.

    Kelsie

  • 17 years ago

    by paul alexander

    Very vivid, but i like it

  • 17 years ago

    by DeathlyAmore

    A very good poem.Pleasw write MORE!. Very good poem. Powerful imagery. Write more.!!!

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