Oh my gosh. I'm somewhat speechless. I could see the hurt/hate written in your words. They have such a heartfelt way of expressing everything. I hope you keep up the GREAT work!! 5/5

Beautiful work m'dear...Very well penned...touching filled with something powerful...You just expressed it well...staright across...Profound write..
Superb!
5/5
xxPoojaxx

"[didn't] you proud?" -- Use 'aren't' instead of 'didn't' to have that question grammatically correct.

Instead of writing, "My -3 months on your womb- dad wanted a better life", try doing the one stanza as follows, in order to have a consistent statement with reason:

"When I was still three
Months on your womb,
My dad wanted a
better life..."

"God, I was [a] nobody(.)"

"And if I'm going to [end] this, I will be [nothing]."

Other than those grammatical errors, I relatively enjoyed reading this piece. It was quite a pleasure to read. The beginning stanza endears me completely. It's heartfelt and sincere tone tugged my heart. I just thought there's too much telling rather than showing.

Nice job, nonetheless. On the whole, it's a good effort.

-Marian

This poem was very well done!!!The language you have used was very strong!!It was really touching and deep,sad and emotional rather than that the flow was good and the imagery was very well done!!
All the best
And take care.

It was so depressive and powerful..I liked the loneliness feeling here and there
My fave lines should be;

But you bore me with loathe
Raise me with hate

Keep it up,
Laura

"Depressed Flower" Wow what a metaphorical heading. The whole poem is so well written and it is a basketful of emotions and beautiful mournful meanings. Keep it up, Well deserved 5/5 tc

It was beautifully written, but it was sad, i dont know how anybody could raise a child with hate, great work, 5/5

This was a great poem but imma go with Mira on this one...it was complicated but very nice...dont take that as a let down im just dumb ^^

Noelle

WOW! this is really powerful 5/5

I think that you could wrote this piece better. This is just my opinion but I don't like atmosphere of this poem. Topic is interesting and this poem deserves 4/5

Okay this poem was good. But it reminded me of one of those poems you'd read in an old book in the library not saying your poem is bad but I just didn't understand. Even though it confused me I still found myself loving it.
4/5
kaila