by TheWorldFellNUWerentThere Jun 4, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
There's a picture of you, |
I loved the whole aspect of this poem, it told a story and it brought tears to my eyes. However, the flow was a bit off and it skipped around at a few parts. I think if you just edited a few lines it would be perfect. Great job. :] |
by unknown
Is the boy dying? |