WOW this was an awesome poem, very unique and well worded, great job, loved it, keep up the good work, your friend Tracy dean 5/5

I noticed a few things in this one, first...

"But someone told me to never look back, directed me along this winding track."

^^ That line is kind of long, you could make it two lines, seperating it at the comma. Same with this one:

"I've been here before, not once but twenty times. And always one too less."

Another thing,

"Where neurones, well they're only neurones"

^^ "neurones" should be "neurons".

Other than that, the imagery was once again wonderful, it kind of skipped around a bit but I read it a few times and it made more sense every time lol.

5.5
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<3

Really good. I like this one nearly as much as the curfew at nine one.
Again, this would make an incredible song.
I'm jealous.

Xp!
--SP

Wow, your writing amazes me every time. Great poem, with excellent choice of words, I love every line. You're so talented!
5/5 from me