Do You Know What It Feels Like?

by stefanie   Jun 4, 2007


Do you know what it feels like
Loving someone
You once let go
Who constantly makes you cry
And makes you feel so low?

Do you know what it feels like
Loving someone
You feel you can't live without
But yet there's so much going on
That you're kept buried in all the doubt?

Do you know what it feels like
Loving someone
Who once told you "You're everything to me."
But now walks around
And you they try not to see?

Do you know what it feels like
Loving someone
Who still kisses and sleeps in bed with you
But when not alone
Ignoring you is all they do?

Do you know what it feels like
Loving someone
Who you see almost everyday
And knowing that
To you, there's nothing that they want to say?

Do you know what it feels like
Loving someone
Who you try so hard for
But yet keeps putting you down
And you feel you can't take anymore?

Do you know what it feels like
Loving someone
Who is constantly chased by others
And you know you can't trust them
But yet you don't want any other?

Do you know what it feels like
Loving someone
Who fills your head with lies
And keeps you up all nights
With nothing to do but cry?

Do you know what it feels like
Loving someone
Who tells you they still love you
But frequently they show different
And you know not what to do?

Do you know what it feels like
Loving someone
Who you know will still hurt you
But yet you can't let go
Because your love for them is deep and true.

- Stefanie, 2007

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  • 17 years ago

    by Angel Of Death

    Beautiful poem, so much emotion through it.. i love how you worded it and everythin 5/5
    xx

  • 17 years ago

    by isabel

    Yeah, i actually know what it feels...(i know it was a rhetorical (did i spell right?) question, but i just felt like answering it....)
    your poem is filled with emotion, what i appreciate the most in a poem, the best poem 4 me is the one who can tell me something, you know, the opposite of "roses are red, violets are blue" stuff...
    it looks like your poem says much to yourself and that makes a poem much better than if you do it just because you felt like writing anything...
    i shall not speak about flow or rhyme, not because it wasn't good, but because the emotion of this is so much that...
    let me see if i can explain it properly: this poem get's right into the reader's heart...
    and that's poetry for me...
    5/5
    keep going
    *isabel*

  • 17 years ago

    by tyanna

    There was emotion all throughout this poem but the flow was off. There were also some things that didn't make much sense..
    "To you, there's nothing that want to say"
    Not sure what that means...maybe..theres nothing I want to say??? Not sure though..
    Overall I think it was an alright poem..but could use some proofreading...4/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Powerful poem. I could feel the emotion in every stanza. The flow was a little off but other than that it was great. I know a little of how that feels. If he is like that you should leave him. It will hurt but you'll find someone who really and truelly does love you and will treat you the way you should be treated. But that is only what I think. Anyways I gave this poem a 5/5.

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