by Brittany C
Powerful poem. I could feel the emotion in every stanza. The flow was a little off but other than that it was great. I know a little of how that feels. If he is like that you should leave him. It will hurt but you'll find someone who really and truelly does love you and will treat you the way you should be treated. But that is only what I think. Anyways I gave this poem a 5/5. |
by tyanna
There was emotion all throughout this poem but the flow was off. There were also some things that didn't make much sense.. |
by isabel
Yeah, i actually know what it feels...(i know it was a rhetorical (did i spell right?) question, but i just felt like answering it....) |
Beautiful poem, so much emotion through it.. i love how you worded it and everythin 5/5 |