I really like this poem, the two lines beginning with "why" at the start of each stanza works very well. Great stuff.

I think it's amazing, not GREAT, Andrew.
Gosh, the nerve of some people! Lol.
I lovce you, darling.
Take care of yourself!
5/5
-Heather

I'm looking for someone with more questions than answers.
And here we are, Lisa.
Brilliant, and short write.

I miss you.
And your comments/late night msn talks.

Well, if this is not your best I don't know what to expect. Lol. I loved the title first off. It is absolutly amazing. The flow was smooth and not off at all and your ryhme was consistant. The only thing that really threw me off was the why, why, why. Lol. Just me though.

My favorite lines were>>
Smash it, Break it, Mutilate it.
Life is just a toy

An amazing write dear, great job!
5.5

Amber :]]

I like it alot it has a good point and i athink you did real good

TIGHT!! lol that ruled