by Roxanne Jun 4, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
If I had a wish It would be that I could see you, |
by claire
This is a great poem, especially for an 11 year old! The beginning sounds a little like a love poem, but then you seem to be talking about your dad you never met. Maybe thats just me. The rhythm isn't perfect, but the feelings are strong, which personally, is the most important thing. Keep up the good work! |