When Does Dawn Become Day?

by claire   Jun 4, 2007


When does pain become death?
When does dawn become day?
When does laughter become laugh
And anger turn to hate?

When does the sun finish rising?
When does it begin its descent?
Who decides where the story started?
The middle? The title? The end?

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  • 17 years ago

    by tears i cry

    Very very very good these poems are getting a bit longer i think but they need to be LONGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG lol 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Sabree

    I will give you a 4/5, because the message was strong but the format was not the best. Keep working at it for you could go very far.

  • 17 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Oh.
    Creative!
    I like!
    Haha. You're short poetry makes me smile.

    Now.
    It's more of a prose that you have going here, but I'll give it to you. It was very powerful; it makes you think and that's what poetry should really do.

    I wasn't <beautifully> penned since it was more of a prose, but d-a-m-n-i-t it had a lot of meaning and sometimes that's the best [usually] part.

    Nicely done.

    xTheEcstasyofSuicidex 5.5

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