I really like this one!!! its different form ur other...good job

ashleigh

Good job on this one, it holds some truth within the lines. "I dont see how someone can love me
I am no one
I am nothing
I dont think before I act
I dont feel
all these traits,
shouldnt they make people hate
not love??" - amazing thoughts.
5/5

This is a pretty good poem, a 5/5!!! keep them coming

Hey!!!! This one is fantastic....But don't you think if someone says they love you that you don't have to say it back until you know you can without regretting it? Some people are ready quicker thatn others. But again Really great.;)

Wow keenan, this poem was awesome.
had so much emotion in it. I especially liked this part:
"How can you love me??
When I do not love you"
this poem is fantastic, keep writing;)

alissa

Excellent poem great job thanks for the comment on "That warm day"