by Teria Jun 5, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
An addictive new feeling eating your flesh and bones, |
by Kurt
This stirred up some painful emotions in me. Great job writing this. It almost literally reached out and touched me with feeling. Amazing write. 5/5. |
This was really great and keep it up i know that u can do it so keep on writting |
by Sarah
Really good! *claps for you* I like it! More poem power to you! ^ ^ |
by Brittany C
I liked it. I thought that it was great. It had nice word choice and the flow was great. I also liked the format you used. I gave it a 5/5. |