Hi tasha

Really liked your poem!! it had great flow! there are a few gramatical errors and stuff you might like to fix though.
1st line, 'our' instead of 'are',
2nd line, separate 'laughed-and', also 'stupid' is missing the 'p',
and i think the 3rd line, you mean 'every' instead of 'ever'
these changes will make a great poem FANTASTIC! i hope you don't mind.
keep up the good work. you have a talent for rhythm!