Really liked how u were able to give to the reader that sense of loss, desperation, fatality...
Particularly liked:
"Can't put on a disguise
to why I feel this way"

"The sky became darkened
couldn't shed me any light
I found no way to settle
no strength in me to fight"

"Too late to be sorry
Too late to turn back time
Too late to say I need you"

Game over... 5/5