Waiting on the world to change

by Xx trying to be strong but only just holding onxX   Jun 5, 2007


As i am waiting on the world to change,
to change my world around,
to make things better in life,

as i just wait on the world,
wait for everything to turn better,

to feel the realness of life,
to be able to run from the pain,
not to stay and wait 4 it to go away,

as i am waiting on the world to change,
as everyday of my life is worse,
but some times better,

to be continued later

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  • 17 years ago

    by Melpomene

    I liked the repetition in this poem I found it to be really good and effective. Instead of using slang words such as the number "4" try writing the word "four" instead because the number draws attention away from the poem making it look untidy. Other then that well done on this sad emotional poem~mel

  • 17 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Beautiful poem..the choice of words was good..but it was a little slang(4 to "for"the other words were pretty good.)..
    Other wise..the poem was good....
    Kp it up
    5/5
    xxPoojaxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Vanessa

    That was really good the reption was excellent, the only improvement that I could see to be made it, try spelling out the words instead of using a shortcut write for instead of 4 it can really mess up the flow, and it draws attention away from the words, as well. Just a little advice, but it was still well written 5/5

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