That was really good the reption was excellent, the only improvement that I could see to be made it, try spelling out the words instead of using a shortcut write for instead of 4 it can really mess up the flow, and it draws attention away from the words, as well. Just a little advice, but it was still well written 5/5

Beautiful poem..the choice of words was good..but it was a little slang(4 to "for"the other words were pretty good.)..
Other wise..the poem was good....
Kp it up
5/5
xxPoojaxx

I liked the repetition in this poem I found it to be really good and effective. Instead of using slang words such as the number "4" try writing the word "four" instead because the number draws attention away from the poem making it look untidy. Other then that well done on this sad emotional poem~mel