This one was great, your word choice was strong the first line was my fav. The meaning portrayed behind it was excellent and I found you pulled this topic off really well. good work on this~mel

This is incredible!

"No one loves who they despise
And no one owes to who they lie"
^^^ So true!

This poem is refreshing and I adore your choice of words... Great work! ;o)

I agree with Melissa 100%! This poem is mind opening and appealing to one who is deep in thought.Keep writing:P
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ur friend,
Kat