Hi i absolutely love this poem, especially, this part. "mystic dance" the poem has so much hidden meanings, and every time i read it i discover another amazing thing, brilliant!

Wonderful poem, very deep and complex.
I really enjoyed it. I love your pieces, keep writing!
5/5

Thats the best part:

He has the power to make a heart beat and drive for a fast

good job i really like it

Thanks for the comment on my poem
it means alot to me

I loved it.....it kept my attention throughout the whole time. i didnt want to miss a single syllable. it was soooo complex every single word made me think deeper and deeper into the meaning of the sentence. keep it up!

This is really good.
keep it up.
i loved some of the lines in it they were so origional it was amazing.
really good job.
<3jess

Ahh another good poem! wright more so i can read! lol :D

See i cant do this. this is great