You, me, and this...

by LuvLyLynn   Jun 5, 2007


As I look into your eyes
you gaze into mine,
Nothing else matters anymore
and everything is frozen in time.

All of a sudden my heart beats faster
and faster as you start to get near,
I sit still because ruining this
moment is now my only fear...

You get closer and closer as
your hand touches my face,
I look at you filled with desire
and its your lips I want to taste...

I could feel your breath hit against
my skin causing me to fluster,
But I'd rather be with you, and
not anyone else, no other...

But I hear something that catches
my attention and I realize everything
is not what is seems,
Oh how I wish I can go back to
sleep and finish that beautiful
dream...

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  • 17 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    This is truly greatly written poem.
    you have done this so greatly, keep it up dear.

  • 17 years ago

    by nikki

    The twist was great, awesome work on this one. life is amazing when you are in love, great write 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by UNDER WHAT CIRCUMSTANCE

    I lyke the end it waz a great twist and i coudl stop reading it. "Karl Wild AKA GodsGift" i guess when u do fall n love u will realize that dreams r no longer good. Great poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    Many people say that dreams are much better then reality, but when you fall in love you'll know how amazing life can be when your dreams are no longer as good. Excellent poem great flow 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by isabel

    This got right into my heart...
    really beautiful...
    the lines of your stanzas, the way you seemed to cut a sentence in two...i liked that...
    though it usually doesn't fit very well, here gave me the feeling that i couldn't stop reading...
    the twist in the ending was really nice...
    excelent poem...
    5/5
    *isabel*

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