Take It From Me

by Dr of Bishonomics   Jun 5, 2007


Take it from me you don't want to step to this,
Take it from me this aint happiness and bliss,
Satan's minions have set up camp in my head,
So this means I'm absent from my bed,
Wandering streets and woodland paths,
And anyone out knows to move past fast,
I'm battling myself on a daily basis,
And the torture is worse than the Sudan crisis,
Can't eat can't sleep can't stop my feet,
As houses and cars are the only things that I meet,
My thoughts are eating me from inside,
And it's getting tougher to hide,
Family look at me with dissappointed eyes,
They've had enough of the deceit and lies,
And I can't exactly blame them,
When pain,distrust and shame is what I've brought them,
So I carry on walking this lonely path,
Thought I can handle this,what a laugh

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  • 17 years ago

    by Kelly

    Okay, i dont get it, why is there no more than one comment on this poem?
    I thought it was great, its got so much raw emotion rather than someone just trying to make a swirly rhyming song! This is just raw frustration, anger, you get the feeling this person just wants to scream and then give up. In my own rambling wy im trying to say i really like this poem, it made an impression on me which is what poetry should do. I thought it was great.

    Kelly
    x

  • 17 years ago

    by Ed or Ian Henderson

    Another darkly painted picture of inner turmoil, but succinct and incisive. 10 times better than most of the crap on this website. Kudos to you.