Another darkly painted picture of inner turmoil, but succinct and incisive. 10 times better than most of the crap on this website. Kudos to you.

Okay, i dont get it, why is there no more than one comment on this poem?
I thought it was great, its got so much raw emotion rather than someone just trying to make a swirly rhyming song! This is just raw frustration, anger, you get the feeling this person just wants to scream and then give up. In my own rambling wy im trying to say i really like this poem, it made an impression on me which is what poetry should do. I thought it was great.

Kelly
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