I like this a lot! It really shows the softer side of you, and how everyone needs someone to rely on, someone who will always be there for them. I especially like the emotion in this, it's expressed really well. The only thing I think could be improved is the title, it isn't very appealing, and the flow is a bit rocky at times, but not overbearingly. Well done overall though. =]

Tammie

I really liked it...the emotion on it really made me sad and whoa I've been in this mood nowadays..so you got me
And you know I will be your friend forever..And I'm not kidding

Especially those I related;

Yet no one knows the inner me
The sensitive one who does cry

Take care david
Your sincere friend,
Dilara

This was a rather heartrending piece by you. It is in fact something which I could thoroughly correlate with, specially this part: "Yet no one yet has proven themselves worthy. To be there when I am down and out".

A pleasure to read, nonetheless. Thank you for sharing, sweet.

-Marian

Aww David
I'm here for you
I hope you know that
this poem was so sad
it made me upset
talk to me when you need me
love always
kaila

Aw, I'll be there no matter what 5/5

Brilliantly penned =) 5/5 i'll be there for you forever
love

~NinjaGirl~

Oh, i'm sad that you had a bad day, this poem really shows it, it is very true and heartfelt. the vocabulary was pretty okay, but it flowed really well so that's good.
5/5
gabriella