Her Touch !

by chavii   Jun 5, 2007


The crystal water longingly savours her beautiful face.
as she gently makes twirls with finger
and creates ripples on its surface.
Bewitched by her enigmatic touch ,
the water rejoices, creating small musical spurts.

--chavii--

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  • 17 years ago

    by alka mendiratta

    Chavii,it was a pleasure reading this short poem.Keep it up.

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    "Bewitched by her enigmatic touch"

    I loved that line.
    This was such a short and sweet poem yet it held so much depth to it, just like the water she's rippling..
    Well done sweets
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by Midnight Mistress

    Wow i really like this poem

  • 17 years ago

    by Domino0792

    Great poem. It has an emotion that flows through it. I really enjoyed this poem alot. 5/5 .... Keep writting from the heart.

    Chan
    -xx-

  • 17 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Very beautiful.....in such few words.....amazing images.....All the best, Debbie

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