Lol...funny...i mean cute...yeah kind of .. |
by Brittany C
I thought that it was very cute. I liked it. I gave it a 5/5. |
by Fsams
Amazing poetry so nice to read and the rhythm is so beautiful. I just love it 5/5 |
by kasia nicole
I liked that, good reyming there i give it a 5/5 |
by Debbie
This endears me exceedingly. It reminds me of the children rhymes and songs which I used to sing aloud. In any case, I have no critique whatsoever; 'twas simply brilliant. Nice work, nonetheless. I actually enjoyed reading and rereading it. Or, should I say, singing? =] |
by Tricky Daze
It was so interesting and so funny |
by Angela
Lol awww this ones cute.. you should make a longer one so we can see what your made of... its precious :) |
This is a quite humorous parody5>>>>> |
by Riz
XD AHAHAHAHA! My brothers didn't find it funny! But I did, well I didn't get it but I still laughed because it was so random! Random stuff makes me laugh! 5/5 |
Thats a cool poem! short but funny and cute! i really liked it. if you keep writitng you could beacome a very good writer!!! this is a 5/5 nice job! |
Okay...I didn't think it was funny and you stole if from baa baa black sheep but you just changed the words...I don't know..Really didn't like it...Sorry.... |
by Synh
Mmmmm.... it wasn't all that funny or cute. It sounded more like you just wanted to put something up on this website because you registered for it. It was simple, unorginal, and required to thought to write in my opinion. |
Ok, so this isnt the best poem that i have read, however for your first attempt of writting on P&Q it was not bad. It had some cute moments, which is good. |
Aww, it was very cute. It's like a nursery rhyme, isn't it? It reminded me of my childhood, when I was about 6. |
This was really cute lol 4/5, brought bak memories of being in a daycare center lol, i must admit, i was expecting something a lot longer and in depth b/c thats all i have been readin all day lol thanx 4 the flashbacks tho lol |
Its cute and all...and i know the "wool" line works with bah bah black sheep...but "full" doesnt really fit the one you're trying to work here, but other than that it was excellent, good job! |
It was pretty good. It was short and in a sense |
by Riley
You know what this reminds me of? |
by LovexMe
This poem wasnt the greatest, but not bad for your first poem. Ba-Ba-Black Sheep, wasn't it? |
Aww that was a really cute poem. I like how you put a new twist on the old nursury rhyme. |