by Karl Wild GG23 Jun 5, 2007
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
I walk through town just after midnight, |
Wow it gave me the chills it makes you not want to walk at night scary |
by xxSuicidalxx
Haunting and chilling...a splendid read. VEry spooky....I love the imagery and the feelings of fear... Great job on this! I'll give this a 5/5!!!! Keep writing! |
Loved it. Very much so, all except for one word: "Whine" doesn't seem to fit well at all with the rest of the poem. That's the only criticism I have; other than that I thoroughly enjoyed this poem. Thanks for sharing! |
by Cassie Cain
Good poem |
by AmberSherrellxxIve Been Sitting Here Trying To Find Myselfxx
Dark..I like! |