I know that feeling to hold on to something important ,making time go freeze. you penned it brillaintly dear.simple yet it speaks your feelings aloud.
Well done.

Take care
chavii.

The first part of it seemed a little rocky, but then once it got going, it was great! I like the simplicity of the wish. It's a hard thing to let time pass (I hate time with a passion, and purposely procrastinate to prove points...hehe) and its a feeling everyone can relate to. Good Job!