Excellently written, I like the rhyming and the flow of the poem. The repetition of "not much left" adds
really sad atmosphere to the poem. 5/5

This poem was beautifully written... I liked the rhyme and the flow... And the emotion that you put into this master piece... Keep on writing and don't stop... I hope to read more of you work... :)

Different. yet so awesome! kick ass. well done. the change really made it much better and exciting.

5/5 David

So dark but very well written and thought out very much emotion was put in this piece of work keep it up 5/5
laura