I think it's important to take a lot of pictures because life passes us by way to quickly and we'll forget those great memories without a reminder. I loved the way you wrote the poem the style was unique especially the second last stanza. Great flow excellent work 5/5

Love the poem. It's unique and intriguing... 5/5, most def.

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Excellent Mez I am sure the picture must be your inspiration for this wonderful piece. U have written a lot from the picture wow 5/5

Hey,
Nice poem, it was very interesting to read and I enjoyed it, I like the message of your poem, the only thing that I dont really like is that I think that some rhymes are a bit forced, but thats just me..well you surely deserve a 5/5!
kisses stephanie

I like each stanza ending with "in those pictures" and i like the effect you did with "fall"
real good.
and i like all the simple yet beyootifuliscious rhyming ;)

Wow.. i thought this was awesome!!! your a great Poet.. Very good job.. I loved they way you Made this.. and how you did that with the word "fall" that was really cool. anyway 5/5

Woah mez.. u gotta tlk to her! the poems reli gud but i reli wish you'd stop feeling so c**p!

Thats an nother amizing poem...iv never read any thing like this great work 5/5

Wow mez.. this poem is great.. i love how u used a picture to convey a msg or memory.. great job!

I agree with lostlllsoul.... i loved this poem...

Genuine smiles,
The camera don't lie
Every flash worthwhile...
In those pictures

^that was so true, and a lot of people could relate to this poem...i love your way of writing.. 5/5 and thanks so much for the comment

This was a really good poem i loved it
Carly

It was very good at the meaning is put together very well but like the first stanzas i wasn't really into it but as i kept reading i got pulled in great job keep writing
-laura-

Great poem! Good use of imagery and the rhyming was spot on. Uniquely done in the seventh stanza. The fifth stanza was amazingly written. You are turning out to be rather good at using repetition without over doing it. The only thing I think you should correct is in line six where you should've used "doesn't lie" instead. Besides one minor grammatic error this poem was absolutely amazing.

I also liked the lines

Though the memories are sweet,
Covered in plastic; deceit
The story is incomplete...
In those pictures

i also liked how you repeated the lines in those pictures because it really reinforced your message.

i think you did well in capturing your idea and message. well done

Great poem! i loved it, it was goood as! i rate it 5/5 =] =]