by Tracy D Rollings Jun 5, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
There is a little boy |
by Hilary Day
Very good. This is so sad. I almost cried. Keep up the great work. ~Hilary |
by Kelly
I think its great that you are doing something to fight this truely vicous and evil crime. Your poem shows that we should all really be doing something to bring a stop to this. I am all about forgivenss but i can not, can not ever forgive someone who does these terrible acts. I trulet from the depths of my soul hate them. But what an amazinbg poem to make people so passionate about it provoke the desired reaction. I imagine these must be extremely painful to write. Hats of to you. Take care. |
by dawn green
Now this one makes me really want to cry, how sad. very, very nicely written tracy!! bravo!!! i wouldn't expect anything less than perfect from you! |
by sadeyes
This one I can understand I have been there too and it is sad |
by Eibutsina
Child abuse makes me MAD MAD MAD and any writer that highlights and educates about this issue is a fave in my book. The simplicity of your language in this piece adds the effectiveness of the message you are conveying - a very well done job! Eirisa xx |