Oh my this reminds me so much a horrible relationship I was in. Night after night I would be alone even though we were supposed to be together. I was to scared to leave the situation thinking that no one could ever love me and that all my past experiences was the reason I was where I was at this moment. Thank God, I broke free from my co-dependent ways. This write is truly touching and stirred so many feelings about the relationship of past. You have such a knack with words and often times I am left bewildered and think you may have taken a peek at my life and have written it. Fantastic flow. Great Job 5/5

Kay

Jeannie
Once again you have left me in awe. Your talent leaves me speechless. Excellent job! Imagery is great. The sadness and pain in this piece brings tears to my eyes.

So nights will find you staring blindly
At a star that sees your pain
And the breath of each new dawn
Finds you there, alone... again.

The ending really touched me.
Take care
Love Cindy

This poem was truely amazing. The best i've read in awhile to tell you the truth. The emotions which you portrayed throughout the entire poem were capturing, powerful and heartfelt. You are truely talented and I suggest everyone read this magnificant read. Well done on an amazing poem. Nicely penned. ~mel