No miss perfect.

by Birgit   Jun 5, 2007


I'm absolutely no miss perfect,
And I know I'll never be.
At least I can say I've got a freckle here, and a freckle there.
Oh, I don't have big boobs! Boohoo,
Who cares?
I'm letting my inner self come out,
With imperfections all around,
I'm learning to love,
Learning to cherish.
Seeing that I am beautiful.

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Personally I don't thing it's finished, but a friend of mine thought it was great =P Let me know what you think =)

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  • 17 years ago

    by ragrag

    I like it very much !

  • 17 years ago

    by Ike Dizzle

    It's cool you just gotta add more. I like it now because it's kinda funny lol. Great job. 5/5
    -vino

  • 17 years ago

    by Fsams

    Great dear. I had a strange feeling in it and I enjoyed it. Its a mixture of feelings with little fun in it.;-)

  • 17 years ago

    by Debbie

    How I wish I could state this to you personally. Ugh :|. In any case, you are truly a beautiful person, sweetie--you've possessed both inner and outer beauties. I mean it, seriously. Oh heck, I'm not even kidding. coughsbeautifulcoughs

    As for the poem, I thought that it could be expanded with more coherent details. It seems to be a mere portion of an even greater poem. I, nevertheless, adored this thoughtful, little piece. Nice work, hun. :) I hope you all the best and take care! Love, Debbie

    ---end of ramble--

  • 17 years ago

    by The Black Rose

    Kon beter.
    hijs wel mooi, maar idd, ik ben t met je eens dat ie nog niet af is...
    dikke knuf

    Daemmy

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